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A Very Yuri Nativity – Final part

Posted on | January 3, 2008 | 6 Comments |

Part 7

The view slowly swims into focus on the two girls locked in lethal embrace. On the left, a round shield extending from NANOHA’s hand shimmers under the force of the sword blow. Around them, leaves and fragments of tree branches flutter broken in the breeze.

SAKURA coughs and blood splatters NANOHA’s cheek and shoulder. The camera zooms out slightly and we see RAGING HEART’s bayonet is embedded in SAKURA’s chest. The tip protrudes below her right shoulder blade, blood drooling lazily down it.

RAGING HEART: ” STRIKE FLAME RETRACTION”

The blade disappears and SAKURA starts to fall toward the ground, unconscious. SETSUNA and KONOKA run out of the double doors into the courtyard.

KONOKA: Sakura-chan!

SETSUNA’s wings flare as she catches SAKURA in mid air and lowers her gently to the ground. SAKURA groans and opens her eyes.

SAKURA: Setsuna….chan?

KONOKA and SETSUNA hug her tightly

NANOHA: I’m sorry to interrupt this obviously touching moment, but I’m afraid it’s time to end this…

All three look up. NANOHA is almost obscured from view by the ridiculously huge ball of pink magical energy being gathered in front of her, aimed at the crying SHIZURU, at the opposite end of the courtyard from the other three.

Sa: SHIZURU!!!!

RH: “STARLIGHT BREAKER PLUS”

Na: (deadpan) Fire.

A voice from offstage: NO!

BARDISCHE: “DEFENSER PLUS”

Just as the beam leaps through the magic circle concentrating it below NANOHA, a YELLOW BLUR streaks in from offstage, positioning itself between NANOHA and the child.

Na: Fate! No!!

FATE takes the blast full on and strains mightily to maintain her shield as her hands burn and blister under the strain. After a good ten seconds, the shield shatters and FATE is thrown to the ground heavily as she is battered by the remains of the attack. NANOHA is instantly by her side, cradling her head in her arms.

Na: (crying) Fate-chan! Please hold on!

FATE: Nanoha….my…sweet Nanoha. Don’t cry; it’ll…be alright.

Na: I don’t understand, Fate-chan…

F: My wonderful Nanoha…It’s been too long since you came into power…You’ve forgotten it…the reason we fought so hard in the first place all those years ago. Don’t you remember, Nanoha? Those long nights we spent, dreaming up our ideal world – one where you didn’t need to be afraid to grab your best friend’s breasts from behind; a world where you could accidentally-on-purpose walk in on her changing…One where you could love her in every way you wanted to?

What happened to her, Nanoha? I…miss…her.

FATE goes limp in NANOHA’s arms. 

Na: NOOOOOOO! Fate!!!!

A tear trickles down NANOHA’s cheek and onto FATE’s forehead. NANOHA slowly lowers FATE down to the ground and plants a kiss on her forehead, whispering something the audience can’t hear. She stands and turns towards SAKURA, flicking the tears away with her sleeve.

Na: We will settle this in one blow. No shields. Full power.

SAKURA nods.

Ko: I can’t heal you completely, but I can stop that bleeding…

A white glow surrounds SAKURA’s wound and the bleeding wanes, then stops, though the edges still remain raw and jagged. SAKURA stands and grimaces.

Sa: Power. Fight. This is the last blow. I’m counting on you.

A green glow suffuses her as she hefts the sword in front of her.

Na: Raging Heart, Riot Blades. Divine Shooter stand by.

RH glows and separates into two long blades which NANOHA takes in each hand. Pink energy balls spawn and surround her.

SILENCE – a BEAT.

Suddenly, the two girls launch at each other, colliding mid-dash with a fantastic explosion of dust and debris. Their silhouettes slowly come into view as the dust settles. 

The two girls eyes are locked together, faces inches apart. SAKURA has two more wounds on her left shoulder and abdomen which smoke through ripped fabric. NANOHA’s right blade pierces straight through her right shoulder. 

Na: I think…you win…

SAKURA pulls her blade out of NANOHA’s chest and she slumps to her knees. A small rivulet of blood escapes from the corner of her mouth. NANOHA’s eyes glaze as she looks through SAKURA to something or someone beyond her.

Na: Fate-chan…you were right…I was so blind. How did I get so far away from our dream? (She looks up at SAKURA) Thank you Kinomoto Sakura, for opening my eyes again…. It was not my place to halt the unrelenting tides of change. I…apologise for my actions. I know this cannot redeem me even one fraction of its worth but…perhaps…in time.

NANOHA coughs mightily and stains the ground bright scarlet.

Na: Please…take care of my kingdom. They deserve a leader who cares for them the way you care for that child.

SAKURA is shocked, but nods.

NANOHA crawls painfully over to where the prone FATE is still lying still and slowly lies down with her, holding her close. 

Na: (sotto) I’m sorry Fate-chan…I’m on my way…

SILENCE for four BEATS

SETSUNA walks slowly over to them and closes their eyes. 

FADE to BLACK.

Narrator: In the years that followed, Sakura and Tomoyo were made joint rulers over the kingdom that was formerly ruled by Nanoha. They were fair and righteous leaders that ruled with honesty and constantly listened to the needs of the people and they spread the good word of the New Yuri to everyone that they could. In time, Shizuru grew up to be a beautiful young heartbreaker of a woman and she was taught in the ways of the New Yuri so that she could go out in the world and preach to the unconverted, just as Oharuhi-sama had directed.

Unfortunately, on her 16th birthday, Shizuru was caught in the bedroom of a foreign princess by the name of Natsuki who she subsequently got pregnant and eloped with, leaving the Good Work to a thoroughly pissed off Sakura and Tomoyo.

Haruhi (VO): Darn! I knew I shouldn’t have made that thing genetically inherited!

Narrator: And so it came to be that the prophecy was upheld, for although the promised child played no part in Oharuhi-sama’s great plan, it was the very act of saving her that saved the world.

THE END

You may now lower your cheese shields and return to your regularly scheduled lives. Thank you for reading!

Category: Fanfiction, Humour?, Shoujo-ai

Comments

6 Responses to “A Very Yuri Nativity – Final part”

  1. lol_matt
    January 3rd, 2008 @ 8:14 pm

    Omg, that fight scene was better than any fights that actually happened in Nanoha or CCS.

    YOU INCLUDED MY OTP SHIZNAT!!! I started laughing so hard when Shizuru got Natsuki pregnant…tonikaku, THAT WAS GREAT!!!

  2. Chilipop
    January 3rd, 2008 @ 11:42 pm

    I cannot stop laughing at the ending

    !

  3. YuribouFan
    January 4th, 2008 @ 1:07 am

    You may now lower your cheese shields and return to your regularly scheduled lives. Thank you for reading!

    I really don’t want to get back to my regularly scheduled life ^_^ and I have been glad to read it this far. My cheese shield has been lowered.

    “Na: Please…take care of my kingdom. They deserve a leader who cares for them the way you care for that child.

    SAKURA is shocked, but nods.”

    Epic Win. Fade to Black. Nice.

  4. Crisu
    January 4th, 2008 @ 2:03 am

    Bravo!

  5. Oracle
    January 4th, 2008 @ 4:53 am

    Awesome!

  6. Silver
    August 6th, 2008 @ 5:52 pm

    Great site i really enjoy reading your cartoons very cool, You should do a little more on the monsters ;-))
    DJ

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